Neela tumi shundor, tumi khoob bhalo
Neela tumi mishti, jodio tumi kaalo..
Neela ammar chhotto prithibir aalo
Ei chhilo biyer aage
Ammay niye tomar bhabna...
Diner modhhe katobaar je bolte
Neela, I love you - love you - love you.
Neela tommar haanshi etto shundor je tumi haanshle jeno
Sonali jhwarna neme aashe aakasher buuk e...
Aar tommar chuul? Tommar chuul dekhle mone hoy
Jeno amaboshhyar andhokaar neme eshechhe prithibir buuk e..
Aar aaj...?
Jokhon biyer duu bochhor purno hote cholechhe
Kato bodle gechho Neel tumi
Ekhon tomar Neelar haanshi, katha; kichhui bhalo laage nah tommar!!
Ei bhalobeshechhile Neel tumi ammay..
Je duu bochhorei haariye gelo tommar bhalobasha?
Tommar jonne Neel ammi Baba - Ma - Baari
Emonki nijer "surname" tao chhere diyechhilam...
Tar puroshkar shwaroop ei bujhi aaj tumi
Chhere chole jele ammay?
Ammar khoob jaante ichhe kore Neel
Tommar bhaalobasha, shei mishti - mishti katha,
Shei shob e tahole miththhe chhilo?
Ki nishthoor tumi Neel!
Sudhu ekta moh er jonne
Ettodiner somporko ke payer twolaye
Maariye dite paarle tummi Neel?
Ekdin katha diyechhile tumi
Tommar Neela ke tumi chharbe nah kokhono eka..
Othocho aaj Neela eka...
Ekdom eka...
Se ki khay, ki pore
Mukta r katha bhaabte giye
Neelar katha bhaabar
Sommoy tommar kothay?
Sunechhilam Neel,
Neela sabbar sojhho hoy nah..
Tobbe etta jaana chhilo nah je
Neelar sthaan Mukta o dokhol korte paare!!
6 comments:
typical kochi boyeshe half-byatha khawa lekha. ekta fresh immature anubhuti.
hey thats really a cool!
I specially liked the metaphor "neela" which not many would get when they first read. May be you should give a little intro to the poem.... kind of prologue...so that we get into the mood.
Well done. Keep it up!!
fatafati!chaliye jao!tor banglaye besh bhaloi dokhol ache...
why do two people in love always have to get separated when u write a poem..?? :O
@ Anupam:
accepted and appreciated. :-)
@ Ankur:
Thats the main thing. People have to get into that mood to get that metaphor bit.
@ Zerlina:
Bangla ta kintu mainly toder kachh thekei sekha. Thanks to all of you
@ Maverick:
Wasn't a conscious effort. Will keep it in mind next time. Though, etta kintu is the first Bangla poem i ever wrote.
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