Isn't it strange that how there are always certain things that become more evident when we voice them, or perhaps, when they fall in retrospective of our situation or condition? For instance, they say that "Time is a great healer." We, however, I feel; probably do not realize its good and bad unless we face it's impact in our lives.
Two days ago, forgetting you seemed like the end of the world. Tears welled up every time I thought how you left mid-way; leaving so many things unsaid and unheard! Almost like stranding the conversation. Well then, was it wrong that I missed you? "You" who weren't my boyfriend, not even a close friend or a confidante even? Is it wrong to miss a random stranger for whom I develop a liking?
Then be it!! Cuz it doesn't work that way and I did miss you. But this too shall pass. Just as the pain has, the happy times spent with you have....this too, shall pass.
What remains is an emptiness. A longing. Of what? you might ask. I fear I know not the answer.. But who knows? Maybe the longing shall pass too! To be replaced by happy thoughts, memories, pain, further expectations and more longing.
And then...that too shall pass!
What remains then?
12 comments:
Excellent choice of words, a masterprice i should say.
The words were so simple but the meaning of the same is very deep.
Keep Going
nicely put together.. great talent in writing i should say :)
just bepok.....but arektu boro hole bhalo lagto....
@ Soumyojyoti: Thanks... Its the words of friends that keep my lazy soul inspired :)
@ Ryan: Thnx pal. I have always looked forward to ur comments :)
@ Akash: Chesta korechhilam.. kintu chhondo ta noshto hoye jachhe besi boro korle. So I let it be :)
Thanks all the same.
Very nice and compact...great choice of words..anyone who reads this will feel that the piece is specifically written for that particular person only... Ending is very nice with a question mark which will always leave a trace of good feelings....
Keep up the good work,madam!! :)
Abhra : Thats a marvellous piece of literary intellect, i must say.... I would love to see a few poems from u... ur writing strongly reflects a great poetic essence..... and as far as the topic is concerned.... i blv, there is nothing in past...nor u can see the future..life is in present..and should be lived not paying any heed to the consequences of past nor the after effects of future... coz nothing remains in this perennial flow of life....
Gr8 work.. its so original...U hv got a gr8 skills to pen down ur thoughts into words..!!
very nice...hope your emotions would find a better medium and a wider audience...
Carry on Sutapa
/Indro
Sutapa....
I am just speechless.
I bow my head to this spectacular and such sensitive right... straight from heart..
...I amproud of you sutapa...
This is a fabulous write.... i can read N number of times with the same empathy...
keep penning....:)
I guess I need Little Coaching From you :)
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@ Joy Da: Thank u so much for your valuable comments.
@ Abhra: Thank you. I hope I live up to the expectations of all of you :)
@ Suraj: Thanks. I just try. Let out the emotions loose that is!
@ Indrasis: I hope the same too. Hopefully shall find it soon :)
@ Ananya: I hope you know how much your opinions mean to me. Thank you for the valuable input.
@ Who are we: Thank you, I am honored.
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